Taste of Summer

The taste of summer
is humid. I hear the sound of
timid hullabaloo.






Note:
linked in Poets Rally.

24 comments:

Cassiopeia Rises | July 27, 2011 at 8:38 PM

Well my friend, I am glad to meet you. I can see I will enjoy reading your Haiku.
This one was lovely.

Melanie

Neni | July 28, 2011 at 12:54 AM

Thanks Melanie, glad to meet you also... :)

Eric 'Bubba' Alder | July 28, 2011 at 2:31 AM

"Timid hullabaloo" - what an awesome phrase!

Nicely cobbled haiku.

Heaven | July 28, 2011 at 4:40 AM

A nice play of words... I like it~

C Rose | July 28, 2011 at 5:44 AM

"hullabaloo" new word for me, I love when that happens. Lovely haiku ~ Rose

Jingle | July 28, 2011 at 5:54 AM

enjoyed it, super profound.

Nelson | July 28, 2011 at 8:34 AM

Wonderful post, very true...Have a lovely Thusday .Keep up the fantastic work! Visit me too. Greetings!

queennivy | July 28, 2011 at 10:39 AM

Nice Haiku Neni!!

RebeccaEll | July 28, 2011 at 6:38 PM

Wonderful! I like how it pops off the page at you. Thank you x

Andy | July 28, 2011 at 6:48 PM

"Timid hullabaloo"...such lovely words. ;-)

Enjoy the Rally.

Mine's here:
On This Orange-Hued Day

Neni | July 28, 2011 at 6:58 PM

All: thank youuu... :)

Kate | July 28, 2011 at 8:48 PM

timid hullabaloo, beautiful! Brilliant oxymoron!

Marbles in My Pocket | July 29, 2011 at 3:27 AM

Wonderful word play!

booguloo | July 29, 2011 at 5:43 AM

Booguloo Like Hullabaloo. Smiles...

jsendslove | July 29, 2011 at 12:30 PM

Love that word now lol! Happy rally

mindsinger | July 30, 2011 at 12:09 AM

That's summer, indeed!

Leo | July 30, 2011 at 12:31 AM

Oh, the hullaballoo is timid alright, the heat scorching! Interesting haiku this! :)

My Poem ~ Vicissitude of thought

magdalenahermanstories | July 30, 2011 at 1:18 AM

Mmmm... Simply lovely!

irenecortez | July 30, 2011 at 1:36 PM

Soft, sweet, and inviting all at the same time. Job well done! :-)

meethimirchi | July 30, 2011 at 5:22 PM

amazing haiku

mindlovemisery | July 31, 2011 at 5:48 PM

Charming haiku!

abthomas | July 31, 2011 at 9:59 PM

"Timid hullabaloo" What a fantastic contrast!

blackswanpoetry | August 3, 2011 at 7:23 AM

very sweet...

oikoirambles | August 4, 2011 at 1:03 PM

Charming Summer haiku :)

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