It’s me the grass
inherently settled in your body of stone
The sun shone on you faithfully
The sun shone on you faithfully
burning your blackened body
The rain slowly and diligently pounded you
penetrating your pores; fragile and watery
The wind chill neatly wrapped your body
covering it up with sad loneliness
Then, at one dusk
soundly asleep in a corner of the city
You're going to give up:
Broken!
People will forget that
there was sun ever flooded you with speckled lights
or rain ever pounded you on and on, challenging the rainbow falling on you
and there was once wind singing melodious songs of seasons in your noisy ears
It’s me the only grass
(which they will see and remember);
My delicate roots outstretched holding you tight,
inherently settled in your body
11 comments:
beautiful,
did you submit it to poets rally.
do it if you forget.
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welcome!
being grass is cool,
divine insights in your piece.
well done.
Thanks... :)
What a beautiful piece of poetry; it graces the pages of The Tale Tellers.
Thank you for coming to, and joining, this new venture for 'free writing'. Your poetry is something to look forward to.
I love this .. there is a feeling of unmatched care in these lines .. touched !
beautifully written, I'm glad I stopped by to check out your blog
What a emotive poem of time's relentless push even crumbling the stone which we think is so permanent. Thought provoking and beautiful in its atmosphere. I really enjoyed reading it.
@All: thank you for stopping by and leaving me comments... :)
I am officially in love with your blog! And this piece is amazing! So happy I came and I will be back!
Kellie: thanks for stopping by...
I like your poems also... :)
Sad... Whether this is an analogy or not. It is still sad to see "the grass" only able to hold the memories of "stone".
happy rally
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