Mediterranean Sea: Fethiye—Turkey |
You are my sunshine
set in a Mediterranean sea
so far away from my country
That I could bring you home
it’s such extraordinary,
a perfect memory,
and a pride of me
You are my sunshine
perfectly round and beautifully orange
that the sea water is willing to change color
*written for Saturday Centus by Jenny Matlock
15 comments:
Lovely! I really liked the part about the sea changing colour! Well done!
I live 2 mins away from water here in our harbour. I've always lived near water and cannot imagine how sad I'd be withuot it nearby. This is lovely.
The image of the water changing color is perfect! I could feel your sense of isolation in this piece, and I wish you well.
Namaste..........cj
I echo the others about the sentiment of the water changing color. Very evocative!
wow. that was great. and the picture is truly beautiful.
@ All: Thanks... :)
@ cj: I'm doing good now, thank you... talking about isolation I felt (when I took this picture a year ago)... well, it can be... :)
I agree with CJ on this! What an excellent post for SC!!
Beautiful photo to accompany words of yearning.
=)
Great short sweet little poem!
I love this well done piece of wishing and hoping along with the loneliness, especially since my favorite color is orange and I live near the ocean !
oh i just love the last line! this was beautifully written!
Nice poem. Makes me think of travelling to the seaside.
Best wishes,
Anna
Sanna's Sunshine SC Wk 66
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I love both the photo and the beautiful words you chose.
xo bj
Awesome! That last line rocks!
What lovely imagery. This was a beautiful use of the prompt this week.
Thank you for sharing your writing talents with us.
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