Whisper

9:36 AM


A red corolla
overheard careless whisper:
doldrums of august!



*written for Haiku Heights #56

6 comments:

Gowthami Nandigala | August 14, 2011 at 10:02 AM

Well written!

Anonymous | August 14, 2011 at 11:28 AM

Very nice imagery!

Anonymous | August 15, 2011 at 8:21 AM

very clever, August can be a very unexciting month to be sure!

Maude Lynn | August 16, 2011 at 12:58 AM

Uh-oh!

Anonymous | August 16, 2011 at 10:44 PM

Without August we wouldn't have that nice change in September... smiles

Vinay Leo R. | August 20, 2011 at 10:11 PM

clever haiku indeed :) lovely!

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