Thick Longing

pic by Simon Howden

In the darkness of winter
I was wrapped by a thick blanket of longing

while shivering, I began to wonder
if you have the same feeling




*written for Carry on Tuesday #134 and Creative Writing Ink.
Also linked in Poetry Pantry #78

6 comments:

desertdew | December 5, 2011 at 9:50 PM

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desertdew | December 5, 2011 at 9:51 PM

Thanks for sharing such valuable information.Keep posting such great info for us thanks

beccagivens | December 6, 2011 at 6:10 AM

I love it -- In its brevity!! :-)

Whitesnake | December 7, 2011 at 4:21 AM

nice, very very nice!

The Poetry Palace | December 7, 2011 at 10:11 PM

beautiful.

notice that you won the perfect poet award for poets rally week 57, Glad to see you take it,

join us any time when you are free.

outstanding poetry along the way, truly enjoyed your lasting support.

keep rocking.
smiles.

xoxox

Novroz | December 10, 2011 at 9:54 PM

That is really beautiful. in the darkness of winter...cool choice of words

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