tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1696932361782010346.post410462467774355202..comments2023-08-28T13:49:36.208+07:00Comments on Purple Nook: Slice of LongingNenihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05663250239152621476noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1696932361782010346.post-3426151883315641362014-12-26T17:48:23.664+07:002014-12-26T17:48:23.664+07:00http://purpletreehouse.blogspot.com/2014/12/christ...http://purpletreehouse.blogspot.com/2014/12/christmas-special-of-poetic-forms-haiku.html<br /><br />inviting you to share a haiku with some of our poetic friends,<br />Happy New Year,<br />keep up the excellence.<br />;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1696932361782010346.post-56546917101418183752014-12-26T17:48:18.314+07:002014-12-26T17:48:18.314+07:00slice of longing is a witty title.
dramatic emotio...slice of longing is a witty title.<br />dramatic emotions can be digested here.<br />well done poetics.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1696932361782010346.post-4843185044106058502014-12-26T17:47:39.689+07:002014-12-26T17:47:39.689+07:00I hope to see your post,
hope all is well.I hope to see your post,<br />hope all is well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1696932361782010346.post-43126652545811814732012-07-30T22:36:12.134+07:002012-07-30T22:36:12.134+07:00Yes I agree. You captured longing well, as we go a...Yes I agree. You captured longing well, as we go about our mundane things.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1696932361782010346.post-12941585888836433272012-07-30T10:28:43.012+07:002012-07-30T10:28:43.012+07:00Thank you, guys... your comments made my day... :)...Thank you, guys... your comments made my day... :)Nenihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05663250239152621476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1696932361782010346.post-19851922660067856332012-07-30T08:15:01.366+07:002012-07-30T08:15:01.366+07:00I agree with Selena. That line is great.
Great w...I agree with Selena. That line is great.<br /><br />Great write overall!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1696932361782010346.post-51937938656298728872012-07-30T02:15:43.326+07:002012-07-30T02:15:43.326+07:00I like the way that you describe longing suddenly ...I like the way that you describe longing suddenly invading your day and the attempts made to move along. Of course, the longing for a loved one is too powerful to simply beat it out of a blanket or rug :) Very enjoyable read.PhotoDictionhttp://photodiction.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1696932361782010346.post-2794996773413982132012-07-30T01:42:55.200+07:002012-07-30T01:42:55.200+07:00Great title, great form, and great content. This s...Great title, great form, and great content. This sounds like something I would write, meaning you touched my heart!Laura Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17165700659874093849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1696932361782010346.post-77325102512032574072012-07-30T01:29:28.305+07:002012-07-30T01:29:28.305+07:00You do a great job describing the power of a heart...You do a great job describing the power of a heart's longings and the effects of that power.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1696932361782010346.post-55055406859019056832012-07-30T00:35:44.742+07:002012-07-30T00:35:44.742+07:00I love the way you show the longing, instead of te...I love the way you show the longing, instead of telling it. The little things, the thought shifts, they work so well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1696932361782010346.post-75486067211874150512012-07-29T22:23:38.473+07:002012-07-29T22:23:38.473+07:00Ah... I can relate. I can feel your longing. My ...Ah... I can relate. I can feel your longing. My favorite line.. "there was a slice of longing /slipped hesitantly in the sloppiness of Wednesday--" I loved that. Well done.Serenahttp://www.serenahelriot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1696932361782010346.post-66570564752649542812012-07-29T21:33:09.147+07:002012-07-29T21:33:09.147+07:00A beautiful write and one I found very relatable. ...A beautiful write and one I found very relatable. I especially like your closing in both the first and last stanzas. Nicely done!Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1696932361782010346.post-5533597965075756052012-07-29T20:59:02.757+07:002012-07-29T20:59:02.757+07:00Saya suka kalimat terakhirnya, Neni. "the fav...Saya suka kalimat terakhirnya, Neni. "the favorite color of yours." seolah2 merangkum semuanya..Nia Janiarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06889048216888269160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1696932361782010346.post-81797397754124434682012-07-29T18:55:49.688+07:002012-07-29T18:55:49.688+07:00Very nice capture of the longing/ memory ~ I spec...Very nice capture of the longing/ memory ~ I specially like last stanza ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.com